Topic:
What I see back from the exchange in Lin Fen
Main Idea:
The differences between students in Lin Fen and us and the causes behind our differences.
Topic sentences:
Topic sentence 1:
We went to Lin Fen First High School for academic exchange.
(Summarize the days there.)
(Summarize the days there.)
Topic sentence 2:
Here are some points I saw.
- class schedule
- manners/ learning attitude
- applause
- hosting
- ideology--afraid of asking some questions
- envy us for our "freedom"
Topic sentence 3:
Their imagination and creativity were limited.
You have to point out the differences in the topic sentences. As for their class schedules and the other things you listed, they are just examples to demonstrate your differences.
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