Topic, Topic Statement, Main Ideas (new new version)

Topic:

What I see back from the exchange in Lin Fen

Main Idea:

The differences between students in Lin Fen and us and the causes behind our differences.

Topic sentences: 

Topic sentence 1:

We went to Lin Fen First High School for academic exchange.
(Summarize the days there.)

Topic sentence 2:

From many activities we attend together, I find them really humble and seemed inflexible.

supporting examples:

• applause
• ideology--afraid of asking some questions

Topic sentence 3:

I don't mean we don't have good rules, but what they made me feel was like they were under a strict rule and more pressure, whether in study or daily life.

supporting examples:

• class schedule
• manners/ learning attitude
• envy us for our "freedom"

Topic sentence 4:

Their imagination and creativity were limited.

supporting examples:

• hosting
• messages they left for us